Thursday, May 10, 2012

Haiku on "Hour"

The hour has passed,
No more whining of fairness,
open your door for air.
.
Hour after hour flies,
Insightful thoughts burst like flood,
Time to a fresh start.
.
The hour is morning,
I've been awake for three hours now,
I enjoy writing.

2 comments:

  1. Haiku is a demanding form, but you have done well with it. Your triad of haiku really connects with me. I find I enjoy reading and writing haiku, especially strung together in stanzas like yours.

    If you do not know the haiku of Richard Wright, you might check it out. I think it's beautiful, even if he is much better known for his prose, especially the novel Native Son.

    You can find my rally entry at the URL link with my comment.

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